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Dangerous Backchat
Dangerous Backchat Hesitates: "I am so sorry - you caught me staring at you." Smiles: "It's okay." Hesitates: "Thank you, but all the same, I apologise, realise I could have been making you feel uncomfortable." Smiles: "Would you like to watch me drink a cup of coffee?" Hesitates: "Can we do that?" Smiles: "I don't see why not - you can look at me without it being uncomfortable, and I can talk to you and find out more about how your mind works." |
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(*Fictional, I should add, to stay true to the nothing is made up claim at the top of my blog. Or at least partly fictional.) Hesitates: "I am so sorry - you caught me staring at you." Smiles: "It's okay." Hesitates: "Thank you, but all the same, I apologise, realise I could have been making you feel uncomfortable." Smiles: "Would you like to watch me drink a cup of coffee?" Hesitates: "Can we do that?" Smiles: "I don't see why not - you can look at me without it being uncomfortable, and I can talk to you and find out more about how your mind works."
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Why is this Dangerous?! It's absolutely PERFECT!! --Author Unknown
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Sweet.
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hmm. This is interesting, brother. Reads like flash fiction. Or. Flash partial fiction. Nevertheless, fascinating. I like flash fiction. However, depending on the subject matter, it can leave out so much. *. *. *
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Doesn't seem dangerous to me.
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Why is this Dangerous?! It's absolutely PERFECT!! All the same, I am glad you think it is perfect!
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Sweet.
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hmm. This is interesting, brother. Reads like flash fiction. Or. Flash partial fiction. Nevertheless, fascinating. I like flash fiction. However, depending on the subject matter, it can leave out so much. Yes, I suppose this is flash fiction - it tells a story in very few words and leaving something to the imagination of the reader. I don't think I would want to read a book of it, but fun for the odd blog post. Actually I think this may have been inspired by an old blog friend of mine who very rarely visits any more, but occasionally used to post oblique dialogue only posts. They always seemed to cleverly carry a story on their own without explanations.
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Doesn't seem dangerous to me.
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Thank you cnnamon, elegant is a very nice compliment. I am pleased you saw there were possibilities. That's what I thought might be dangerous!
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But surely if the coffee drinker slurps that would bring the liaison to an abrupt end? Intriguing wee exchange McDream!
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But surely if the coffee drinker slurps that would bring the liaison to an abrupt end? Intriguing wee exchange McDream!
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